Welcome the snake, a symbol of wisdom and cunning, but also delusion and deception. Read my excerpt below that involves deception and
delusion....
This is an excerpt taken from my new adult novel, IMMORTAL ECLIPSE
Sunlight
reflects on the stained-glass windows, sending rays of color over the garden.
My eyes drink in the lush landscape. That’s when I notice the immobile, tall
figure. Dorian is leaning against the mansion, twenty feet away, and staring
raptly in my direction. I should be perturbed that he stuck around; instead I
feel a surge of amusement.
A
dying tree off to the side of the garden stands inside an area of dead grass
that appears to be trimmed into a circle. Near the tree, a wooden cross—like a grave
marker—has been hammered into the earth. Within the circle are wilting flowers
and dead weeds.
Wicked
strange.
Snubbing
Dorian, I lift the Nikon D7000 and snap pictures of the garden, then the house.
Through the viewfinder, I catch a shadowy person on the second-floor. A deep
sense of uneasiness drains into my gut. When I lower the camera, and squint up
at the window, the person vanishes.
Wait, I could’ve
sworn I saw...
I glance over at Dorian, but he’s gone. I
raise the camera again, refocus the lenses, and peer through the viewfinder.
The figure reappears. It’s a woman, her black hair flying wildly about her pale
face. She puts a hand on the foggy glass. Lowering the camera, I look at the
window.
There’s
no one standing there.
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8 comments:
I'm intrigued!
Okay. Creepy. Way to leave the reader desperate to know more!
That's delightfully creepy. :)
Thanks for stopping by!
Wow, very creepy. that would spook me.
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I agree, creepy! I like it!
thanks for the fun post! Very creepy but good :)
A creepy excerpt there.
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